EnDiaryA Rainy Day at Home
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A Rainy Day at Home diary example
Sunday
It rained all day. The sky was gray, and the street was very quiet. I wanted to go to the park, but I stayed home.
In the morning, I cleaned my room. Then I called my sister. We talked for twenty minutes. She could hear the rain through my window.
After lunch, I made tomato soup and read a funny book on the sofa. The soup was hot, and the rain was loud. I felt warm and safe inside. It was not an exciting day, but it was a good day.
Kata-kata yang patut diingat
Kosakata berguna
gray
warna antara hitam dan putih
The sky was gray.stayed home
tidak pergi keluar
It rained, so I stayed home.inside
di dalam bangunan atau kamar
I felt warm inside.Lihat di balik layar
Mengapa entri ini berhasil
Hubungkan perubahan rencana dengan kata 'but'
'I wanted to go to the park, but I stayed home' menempatkan rencana dan kenyataan dalam satu kalimat.
Gunakan suara dan suhu
'The soup was hot' dan 'the rain was loud' membuat adegan lebih mudah dibayangkan dengan kata-kata yang sangat sederhana.
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