The Hike That Didn’t Go to Plan
道に迷い、濡れた地図、そして午後の時間を救ってくれた道の脇のカフェが描かれた、B1レベルの物語的なエントリです。
The Hike That Didn’t Go to Plan diary example
Saturday, 9:40 p.m.
Maya and I planned an easy two-hour hike, which sounded perfect after a long week. The weather forecast said “light cloud,” so neither of us packed a proper raincoat. That was our first mistake.
About forty minutes into the walk, we followed a blue sign instead of the yellow one. We did not realize it until the path became narrow and the town disappeared behind the trees. Then the rain started—not light rain, but the kind that soaks your socks in a minute. My paper map turned soft in my hands, and Maya began laughing. I was annoyed at first, but the situation was too ridiculous to stay angry.
We eventually reached a road three kilometers from where we had parked. Across the road was a tiny café with steamed-up windows. The owner let us leave our wet jackets by the heater and served us enormous bowls of mushroom soup.
We never reached the viewpoint. Still, the soup tasted better than anything I have eaten this month, and the walk back to the car was full of bad jokes. Next time I will pack a raincoat—and check the color of the sign.
覚えておきたい単語
役立つ語彙
forecast
天気の予測
The forecast said there would be light cloud.soak
何かを完全に濡らす
The rain soaked my socks.eventually
最終的に、特に遅延の後
We eventually reached a road.詳細を見る
このエントリが効果的な理由
コミカルなタイミングのために文の断片を使う
「それは私たちの最初の間違いだった」という短い表現は、読者にさらなるトラブルが来ることを予測させます。
悪い出来事と現実の結末のバランスを取る
このエントリは完璧な教訓を強要しません。濡れた靴下、美味しいスープ、そして悪いジョークだけで、その日がなぜ重要だったのかを示すのに十分です。
あなた自身で書いてみよう
同じ形式で、同じ物語ではなく。
- うまくいかなかった計画を説明してください。
- 計画が変わったと気づいた瞬間は何でしたか?
- 予期せぬ良い部分はありましたか?